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Review: Want

I *claim* to be a fan of the sic-fi genre. I’ve said before that it’s my favourite. But it has come to my attention that I read far more contemporary and fantasy than sci-fi, which is shameful. So as soon as I heard about Want and realised it was sci-fi/dystopian then I knew I had to read it. So I did. want-by-cindy-pon

Title: Want

Author: Cindy Pon

Genre: YA Sci-fi

Themes: deception, pollution, climate change, activism, friendship, rich people are literally bubble heads.

My blurb: In futuristic Taipei, there are two types of people. The ultra-rich yous protect themselves from the terrible pollution with oxygen suits and money, while the meis die young, suffering from all the environmental degradation and their poverty. After someone Zhou loves is murdered trying to bring in new environment laws, he and his friends decide they’ve got to do something to get back at the corporation who is responsible. But their plan is risky and the first thing they need is a lot of money. Zhou’s actions are about to get him into a game of deception and risk where he might lose sight of the end goal…

There were a lot of good things about this book, but first I have to complain about something important. Namely, the writing style. I haven’t read anything by Cindy Pon before, but the way this book was written really affected my perception of the story. The book required a lot of worldbuilding because of its dystopian nature, but instead of showing aspects of the world of pollution and global warming and poverty inequality, it was totally told. Especially at the start of the book, the writing had what felt like paragraphs spouting information that wasn’t always that relevant, though it did help paint the scene. At other times Jason (that’s his code name—we never learn his real first name, which is weird) comes up with information that you wish he’d announced earlier, like ‘oh I was not sick now because I had the flu when I was 10’ or ‘this person said X important thing to me the other day’ instead of actually showing it happening. This made it feel like the things being narrated didn’t happen.

The writing was also occasionally confusing, especially during action scenes, and there was a big reveal at the end that wasn’t made to feel that big. The book opens on an action scene, then goes back to ‘two months earlier’ to explain what’s going on. After that, though, there is no explanation of the time gaps, even though it becomes evident that weeks or months have passed with only a few days or events having been described. Generally, something about the writing style really made me feel disconnected from Jason and the other characters, even though it was a first person narration, which normally is easier for me to connect to.

However, there were some good things about this book. Firstly, I really liked how it was set in Taiwan, because I’ve never read any other books set there (and the author was born there) and my ex really good friend is Taiwanese. I liked the descriptions of food and although it made the future look bleak, it wasn’t hopeless either.


I also liked how it dealt with wealth inequality, something that’s rapidly becoming a bigger problem and environmental degradation. I personally believe both of these are going to be big problems in the future and I don’t get why more dystopias don’t tackle them. Like I don’t think the US is going to become a monarchy that likes to play games to amuse the prince and help him find a wife. But growing commercialism, the ethics of surveillance without consent, bio-warfare and deadly viruses, and poverty and climate change are all things that are already problems now and will be in the future. I liked how this book touched on all of these.

Also, I just generally love sci-fi and dystopia, not gonna lie.


I really liked the love interest character! I liked how she wasn’t only petite and subservient, but she wasn’t just the Stronge Female CharacterTM archetype. She was a combination of all of them. Jason’s ‘gang’ and all the minor charcters were really interesting.

The plot was intense and usually interesting. I liked how I thought the plot was going to centre around all of Jason’s deceptions getting him into trouble and be something where nothing would happen if everybody was honest, but it wasn’t.

Overall, I liked the idea of this book, and it definitely tackled some good topics, but failed to execute them well enough to make me like it.

Characters: 3/5

Writing: 1/5

Setting: 4/5

Plot: 4/5

Total: 3/5

Have you heard of this? What other books have you read set in South east/East Asia? (I need recommendations) Is there a genre you claim to love, but never read? What have you read which has a really great concept but not as good writing?

14 thoughts on “Review: Want

  1. Hi Shar! I enjoyed reading your review. I personally enjoyed Want, but I appreciated the different perspective. I’m sorry to hear the writing wasn’t your thing though, but that’s totally fair!
    I totally agree – I wish the stuff talked about in Want was written about more. It’s such an important topic and I think it has so much potential for exploration! I’m looking forward to the sequel though – maybe Pon will explore other really cool things. 🙂 Great review.


    1. I feel like there are so many dystopia that are like ‘the US is a police state’ or ‘the world only has 5 countries’ and not enough that deal with problems that are more realistic and that we’re already facing. Because I personally think a good dystopia should comment on society today and ideally be universally relevant. Example: Fahrenheit 451 (although that’s not about the environment, which I think is the future’s #1 concern right now, unfortunately).
      I’m definitely planning to continue this series because I think it has a lot of potential despite my problems with the writing 🙂


  2. Good review! You’re right, it should be written about more, but I think the thing is that people want to escape – and they’d rather escape to an unrealistic future rather than one they can see happening – reading a dystopia about your possible old age? Totally depressing. So I think that’s why.
    BTW, I also love sci-fi! And I’ve heard of this one lately too.


    1. That’s a very plausible theory! If our world is going to end up terrible, then why would we want to read about it? On the other hand, I think writing can serve as a sort of activism and make people want to change how the world is going.


  3. Ooh I really loved this book so sorry to hear this was little disappointing! I do agree with you, I loved how it talked about income inequality which is such a relevant issue. Thank you so much for sharing this lovely review 🙂


    1. I’m glad you liked the review! I really WANTed (hahaha I’m so punny) to like this book and I was disappointed that the writing wasn’t my jam, but I’m still happy I read it. And the themes and the setting were all pretty interesting, so it wasn’t a total loss.


  4. Oh, I’m sad to hear you didn’t enjoy this one as much! I’m so happy that this takes place in southeast/east Asia (my family is from Thailand) but it sucks that the writing made an info-dump of all the worldbuilding!


    1. I’d love to read a YA book set in Thailand! That would be super cool. (actually, Shanti has written a book se tin Thailand but other than her I don’t know anyone). It’s like, this is cool world building but why was it so info-dumpy? *cries*

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